Final DPS

This is my final DPS, i asked my teacher for further feedback to tell me what I could do to improve my final draft; he told me to:

1. Add images next time of the artist in the white spaces.
2. Change a spelling mistake: Visi to Visit.
3. Delete repeated word: 'Around'.
4. Remove shapes: White square, two thin rectangles.
5. Add another image box.
6. Change font size from 17 to 12 as it is too large.
7. Add more content to the interview: As i have changed the font, i will need to add more in the interview with the artist.
8. Make a finger width around the DPS to add a slug.